a few weeks ago i read this incredibly beautiful nazm by rahi masoom raza, titled 'chand aur chakor', based on the story of the chakor, so deeply in love with the moon that it flies til exhaustion attempting to reach to its lover. i loved it so much that i wanted to try translate and adapt it, and make a short and sweet game out of it. for funsies. when i say this translation is fast and loose, i mean it, i can't attest to how accurately i've captured the tone or the rhythm (it reads beautifully in urdu, seriously. i could go on and on about it), so consider this mimijay's take on it. i hope i can show you all what captivated me about this poem.

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this project was made to practice visual novel creation, and made for videotome jam 3. i plan to add the option to switch languages soon.

art, music and translation by mimijay.
original poem by rahi masoom raza.
images by peteris gertnerspanagiotis falcos, and daphne fecheyrz

made using super videotome modded and bosca ceoil: the blue album.

Published 23 hours ago
StatusReleased
PlatformsHTML5
Rating
Rated 5.0 out of 5 stars
(1 total ratings)
Authormimijay
GenreVisual Novel
TagsAtmospheric, Pixel Art, poem, Singleplayer
Average sessionA few minutes
LanguagesEnglish
InputsKeyboard, Mouse, Touchscreen
AccessibilityOne button
ContentNo generative AI was used

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